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swear that you should hear it ([personal profile] sardonicynic) wrote in [personal profile] melcreada 2010-03-15 11:18 pm (UTC)

Oh, wow.

I -- yeah.

Talk about incoherent with ow and love and -- GAH. I'd quote some of my favorite lines, but I'd end up copying and pasting the whole damn thing.

But this -- oh man, this:

We don't have a past so much as a bunch
of electricity, power never put to good use.


Stunning, is what that is. And I love how this entire poem is bittersweet without being maudlin, sad without being overwrought.


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